tour de Bali

Assalamu’alaikum ….
hai hai hai , aku kemarin tanggal 13 Desember 2011 ke Bali hloh sama temen temen seangkatan SMA N 1 Kalasan 2013 . Aku baru pertama kali kesana bedaa sama temen* yang mungkin udah berkale kale getoh , sampe masih apal tempat-tempat di Bali itu kayak gimana haha. kita kesana naik bus Sumber Jaya, busnya ada 3, bus A warna ungu , B warna ijo dan C warna kuning , keren gak tuh bis nya aja warna warni kayak pelangi .Jerenjengjenjeng , aku di bus B :D . Sebelum berangkat kita berdoa bersama dulu memohon kepada Allah supaya di beri kelancaran dan keselamatan .Dan akhirnya kurang lebih pukul 8 kita baru berangkat. Katanya sih bus B itu baru #alhamdulilah yah #  yang ada di bis B juga seru seru gituh deh Kalo sama bety, epin, layli bawaannya ketawa mulu sama mereka dan enggak lupa sama manusia-manusia di bus B seruuu semuaaa  . Kita mampir di Rumah Makan Panorama dulu buat makan sama sholat, mandi , sikat gigi , buang air kecil yang penting jangan nyuci baju disana  .Sampe gak kerasa udah sampe di pelabuhan Ketapang ( pukul 00.00 WIB)  buat nyebrang ke pelabuhan Gilimanuk. Diatas kapal suasananya rame #iyalah namanya juga tempat umum ==”# . Diatas kapal gak ada tulisannya “Dilarang Narsis” kok yaudah gak lupa diatas kapal kita juga tetep narsis.

naik kapal

alhamdulilah yah  kita udah sampai ke Pelabuhan Gilimanuk pukul 03.30 WITA berarti kalo di Jawa masih jam 02.30 WIB

di pelabuhan Gilimanuk
kiri ke kanan = evin, betty, silfi, laili

 

Lanjuuuuutttttt …..
perjalanan  menuju ke tempat wisata pertama , ke Tanah Lot tapi sarapan , mandi , dsb dulu . Terus ke RM Agung Bali  atau apa ya aku lupa nama Rumah makannya pokoknya pake Agung agung gitu hehe maap . abis sarapan langsung capcus ke Tanah lot . tapi evin sama laili enggak boleh masuk sampai ke dalem soalnya mereka lagi dateng bulan , kata nya sih percaya gak percaya kalo ada cewek datang bulan masuk ke pura tanah lot bisa bisa dateng bulannya itu gag selese-selese ada juga yang bilang gabisa pulang lagi , ngerii jugag yah . Jadi dari kita berempat yang masuk cuman  aku  sama Betty aja. Di Tanah lot ada air suci dan ular suci . Menurut kepercayaan orang Bali ular suci itu yang njaga Tanah lot itu dan kalo kita brani megang sambil ngucapin keinginan kita , keinginan kita itu bisa terkabul , begitu ceritanya , itu tergantung kepercayaan kita aja . Tapi aku ga berani pegang  

 
Tanah Lot

 
Ular Suci

 

Lanjut bang ..
Meluncur ke Tanjong Benoa…
disana bisa jet sky, prahubootria, paraselling . Aku milih naik perahu ke pulau penyu, bayar naik perahunya per orang Rp 40.000,- sekapal isinya 10 orang . Aku sekapal sama laili, evin,anggun, nurliati, mita , selpa, aby, adit, amalia . udah sepuluh orang belom ? kalo kurang berati aku lupa .  Sebelum berangkat kita dikasih roti tawar . eiittsss bukan untuk dimakan kita tapi buat makanin ikan di laut nanti . #untung belum aku makan # . Air lautnya bening ikannya sampe keliatan . wow
Dipulau penyu itu gag cuman ada penyu doang tapi ada ular ada burung jugag hlo..

 
diatas perahu otw ke pulau penyu

di pulau penyu

 

 
narsis dulu sambil nungguin temen-temen

menuju ke Ulu Watu..
disana aku ketemu sohib-sohib ku #jiah ngaku
rasa haru menyelimuti soalnya udah lama ga ketemu mereka :’) pas kesana itu pukul  12.30 , puanass gilakk
muka kita kepanasen meling-meling kayak coro deh :o
tak kasih gambar ulu watu aja nih ..

ini dia pemandangan di Ulu watu

habis itu cabuutt ke GWK ( Garuda Wisnu Kencana )

belakangku itu ngapain cobak ?

 

kepala Garuda

foto sama bli-bli yang mandu perjalanan kita

Karena kita capek kita langsung menuju hotel Gatot Subroto buat istirahat soalnya masih panjang perjalanan besok . Aku sekamar sama Evin, Betty, Laili di kamar 226  haha . Dikamar aku yang pasti paling duluan tidor maav ya ceman – ceman :*

hari selanjutnya kamis 15 desember 2011
pukul0 7.00 WITA , kita harus sudah siap di bis , menuju ke pementasan tarian barong . Yang menggambarkan pertarungan antara kebaikan vs kejahatan. Barong mewakili kebaikan dan Rangda mewakili kejahatan .

 foto sama penari dijadiin gantungan kunci #gubrak




ini barongnya

menuju pusat oleh-oleh Cahayu dan diberi motivasi-motivasi untuk kita biar bisa seperti pak Rabani. Tau enggak pak Rabani ? tau gak ? tau enggak je ? mau tau engga ? mau ? gausah nangis tak kasih tau deh .. Pak rabbani itu pemilik Cahayu itu . Kita disana di beri motivasi-motivasi biar bisa sukses kayak pak robbani itu .Diceritain juga perjuangannya pak Rabani sampai bisa jadi kayak gini .

 

pak Robani yang tengah hlo ,
yang pinggir pake baju item itu Juno entah kapan dia tiba-tiba ada disitu haha pisss

Go to Pasar Sukowati,
katanya sih murah kalo kita pinter nawar , kalo nawar suruh setengah dari harga dari penjualnya . Tapi masalahnya anu , anu apa hayo ? anu … aku kagag bisa nawar…
penjualnya ternyata galak-galak men , maksa lagi . Bagiku hlo itu ..
setelah kita dimarahi, dijudesi sampe di usir sama penjualnya akhirnya kita dapet apa yang kita cari , ternyata gag semua penjual disana galak . Setelah ada pengumuman lewat toa buat manggilin siswa SMA 1 Kalasan waktunya sudah habis ,suru cepet-cepet menuju bis , yang enggak cepet-cepet ke bis … Tinggal… #enggak enggak bercanda

Menuju Pantai Sanur..
ternyata lagi pasang jadi kita gabisa turun ke pantai deh
tapi diobati dengan pemandangan pantai sanur , hmmm

pantai sanur

Ini nih Ini … Menuju ke Joger 
rame bener itu joger , sampe sana malah bingung mau beli apa :o . dan akhirnya aku cuman beli sepasang sendal jepit dan titipan kaosnya putri titis nastiti .
Selese belanja langsung menuju ke Pantai Kuta , Naik mobil nano-nano rasanya abis naik mobil nano nano pun juga rasanya nan0-nano sumpek lah, nggeronjal-nggeronjal lah ini lah itu lah #stop . Sampai di kuta kita poto-poto tapii hasilnya gag ada yang bagus angin nya kenceng bet  . contohnya ini ni ..
      
abis dari pantai Kuta kita langsung ke Hotel . buat bobok dan Semoga mimpi indah :*

hari ke-3 check out dari hotel . Jangan sampe ada yang ketinggalan , yok di cek yoookk…
sebelum ninggalin hotel kita poto dulu , buat kenang-kenang gituuu..

judul poto ini “alumni XF 2010 “

langsung menuju Bedugul . Ini tempat yang aku sukain buwanget , soalnya pemandangannya buagus banget :’) jadi pengen kesana lagi . disana kita bisa naik perahu , tapi aku gak naik tau gak kenapa ? #duit menipis . Disana kita juga bisa belanja oleh-oleh buah-buahan .

 

foto ku sama Betty

yahhhh udah selese deh liburanku ke Bali , huaaa rasanya masih kurang . Tapi juga kangen Jogja ku teristimewa . Semoga besok bisa ke Bali lagi ya ..

makasi yah udah baca cerita ku ini , 
saya hanya ingin mengucapkan terimakasih banget udah ngeluangin waktu buat mbaca catetanku ini nih , dan semoga bermanfaat #ada manfaatnya ye ? #yah kan kalauu ada ..
sekian .
wassalamualaikum, Wr.Wb

ANALYTICAL EXPOSITION

ANALYTICAL EXPOSITION

An analytical exposition is a type of spoken or written text that gives the writer/speaker an opporunity to deliver his/her thought, point of view, or arguments in order to persuade the listeners or readers that something is the case.

To make the persuasion stronger, the speaker or writer gives some arguments as the fundamental reasons why/how something is the case. This type of text can be found in scientific books, journals, magazines, newspaper articles, academic speech or lectures, research report etc.

A.Generic Structure of Analytical Exposition

1. Thesis : Introduces the topic and shows the speaker/writer’s position; (Outlines of the arguments are presented.), it begins with I personally think, In my opinion, I believe

2. Arguments : It consists of Point and Elaboration (berisi tentang alasan-alasan untuk medukung Thesis yang dikemukakan. Diawali dengan kata, atau f rase First, Second, Furthermore, In addition, The last,)

Point, states the main argument

Elaboration, develops and supports each point of argument

3. Conclusion : concludes the whole exposition. It also restates the writer’s main topic stated in the previous thesis. This part is extremely important because it is aimed at emphasizing (menekankan) the writer’s opinion toward the issue. (diawali dengan kata2 In my conclusion, Based on the arguments above, dll)

B. Generic Features of Analytical Exposition

1. An analytical exposition focuses on generic human and non human participants.

2. It uses mental processes. It is used to state what the writer or speaker thinks/feels about something. For example: realize, feel etc.

3. It uses Emotive language adds strong description to the facts and so help to create an extremely subjective tone of the text. It plays a role in persuading the readers toward the writer’s opinion e.g. Most adult Indonesian …,

4. It uses Evaluative language is another way to persuade people agree with the writer’s opinion e.g. This is the worst, It’s true, It’s important, It’s clear, I believe, It is obvious that etc.

5. It often needs material processes. It is used to state what happens, e.g. .has polluted… etc.

6. It usually uses Simple Present Tense and Present Perfect Tense.

7. Enumeration is sometimes necessary to show the list of given arguments: Firstly, secondly …, Finally, etc.

8. Emotive words (e.g. worried, alarmed etc)
Words that qualify statements (e.g. usual, Probably etc)
Words that link arguments (e.g. firstly, However, therefore etc)

Samples:

Corruption and Indonesian Culture

Thesis: Corruption has happened for many years and today it becomes a bad culture in Indonesia for three reasons

Argument 1:

Most adult Indonesian or foreigners have known and admitted that corruptions happen in many places. The daily newspapers, news programs on TV and radio have reported corruptions are done everywhere, almost in all departments or public services of this country. Corruptions happen in health, education departments and banks. When we manage to get some documents in public service offices, we usually need much money to pay. Manipulations happen everywhere
Argument 2:

The actions to eliminate corruption are weak. The ever stronger culture seems not to come to an end when the responsible institutions who have to reinforce the justice today commit corruption. This is the worst. Corruptions happen in police department, courts where judges, public prosecutors, lawyers make deals to do corruption. All of us also heard in the end of 2004, Probosutejo reported that he had bribed the Supreme Court, or called Mahkamah Agung which becomes the highest level where the justice can be obtained. Perhaps you have to try to come to the local courts and see what happen there. You will see practices of bribery and other kinds of corruption. Therefore, we can say that corruptions become our culture. Do you like it?

Argument 3:

The citizens have no goodwill to fight against the corruption. They create the situations in which people have opportunities to do corruptions. The citizens like to break the rules because they are not disciplined. For example, in the street when they drive a car or ride motorcycle, they do not have the driving license or necessary documents. Then, they are caught by the local policemen. To avoid more difficulties, they like to bribe the officer. The officer let them go then. In other words, the citizens and officers are the same, doing corruption together. If only the people were critical, disciplined, and obey the rules, and willing to report any wrong behaviors, this country will not be number one corrupting country in the world.
Reiteration/ conclusion:

We can conclude that corruption is becoming a bad culture in Indonesia if it is not ended soon by all of us. It seems that there must be more severe penalty for the Corruptors. Do we still care about the future of this country?

Smoking in restaurants

Smoking in restaurants is just not on. It must not be allowed because it is rude, harmful to others and dangerous for the smokers.
Firstly, smoking in a restaurant is impolite. The smell of the smoke affects all people and can turn them off their food. People pay to taste good food and not to be put off by foul smelling smoke.
Another reason smoking should not be allowed in restaurant is the harm it can do to others. Passive smoking that is breathing in smoke made by a smoker can lead to asthma attacks and even cancer.
Finally, smoking is dangerous and a health risk to the smokers. Cigarettes cause heart and lung disease and people should not smoke anywhere, not just in restaurants.
Therefore, smoking in restaurants is impolite, harmful to others and a health risk to the smokers and should not be allowed in any restaurants.

CLAUSE:

A clause is a group of related words containing a subject and a verb.

A phrase is a group of related words that does not contain a subject-verb relationship, such as "in the morning" or "running down the street" or "having grown used to this harassment."

Clause is categorized into independent and dependent clauses. This simply means that some clauses can stand by themselves (independent), as separate sentences, and some can't (dependent).

Dependent clause = subordinate clause: this means that the clause is subordinate to another element (the independent clause) and depends on that other element for its meaning.

An independent clause, "She is older than her brother" (which could be its own sentence), can be turned into a dependent or subordinate clause when the same group of words begins with a dependent word (or a subordinating conjunction in this case): "Because she is older than her brother, she tells him what to do."

Independent -> dependent: She is older than her brother -> Because she is older than her brother,

#ciri DEPENDENT = ditempeli conjunction

SENTENCE:

Simple: satu ide, S+V

Compound: 2/ more independent clause -> independent +and, but, or+ independent

Complex: 2/ more clauses -> independent + dependent, digabungnya pakai conjunction berikut:

Common Subordinating Conjunctions
after although as as if as long as as though because before even if even though	if if only in order that now that once rather than since so that than that	though till unless (if not) until when whenever where whereas wherever while who, which, etc

See LOOK AHEAD page 102 (if I’m not mistaken) and do the exercise on the next page!!

Untuk menggabungkan 2 klausa,

· Analisa dulu kira2 hubungan keduanya bagaimana?

· Untuk hubungan waktu (AFTER, BEFORE), lihat masing2 klausa… identify mana yang terjadi lebih dulu..

· Polanya bisa:

1. Conjunction + clause 1+ comma (,)+ clause 2

2. Clause 1+ conjunction+ clause 2

PASSIVE:

BE+V3

# yang bisa dipasifkan= yang punya OBJECT

Helps -> is helped

Help -> are/ am helped

Helped -> was/were helped

Will help -> will be helped

Is/am/are going to help -> is/am/are being helped

Have helped -> have been helped

Has helped -> has been helped

Had helped -> had been helped

Setelah diubah, untuk check terakhir, lihat kesesuaian SUBJECT DAN VERB nya…

Tunggal : is, was, has, does , etc; Jamak …

Ingat juga pola kalimat tanya

(-) She doesn’t call you -> does+call = calls

(+) she calls (not) you

Passiv : you are called (not) by her. Jadinya, you are not called by her.

-GOOD LUCK-